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anikoku
Tobi
Joined : 15 Jan 2008
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|  Subject: I share my own drabbles.  Thu Feb 21, 2008 7:49 pm | |
| I have quite a few, and I decided to share some with my dear community.
So, here we are. The first is a short HidaxTema drabble (is that redundant?).
| Spoiler: | | | “.......you like penguins.”
“Got a problem with that, bitch?”
“If I didn’t, I wouldn’t be saying anything, you idiot.” Despite the slenderness of her figure, Temari pushed effortlessly through her lover’s trash. That was because the affirmed “trash” was plush penguins; rows of them. She wrinkled her nose in disgust.
“Hidan.”
“What the hell is it?” The man asked, scooping up one of the deformed birds and holding it to his chest.
Is he hugging that thing? “You’re telling me that you’re a masochistic S-rank criminal who is religious but homicidal, immortal, and on top of that, obsessed with penguins.” Temari narrowed her icy teal eyes. “Why?”
Hidan rolled his own eyes. “They’re fuckin’ cute.”
“Please.”
“Seriously, woman.”
To both of their surprise, the sand-nin started to laugh.
“Hey! It ain’t frickin’ funny!” Hidan grabbed at her, but Temari was faster; moving aside and snorting in a un-lady-like manner. Pretty soon she was on the ground among the penguins, clutching at her stomach.
Hidan bent down to look at her. “It ain’t funny,” he growled, a faint blush on his cheeks.
Temari smirked at his expression. “You think I care about things like that, you asshole?” She pulled him down for a kiss.
He responded eagerly, wrapping his arms around her.
“Oh, man.”
“What?”
“I so fuckin’ love you.” |
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|   | | Fai_re
Akatsuki Overlord - Deidara
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| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Mon Feb 25, 2008 9:01 pm | |
| I ♥ you. Thank you! 
You write them so well!! 
I am in your debt. Would you like a banner? 
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| | | | Kisame-san
Kisame
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Location : ...feudal Japan with my Inu/Texas
| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Tue May 20, 2008 5:52 pm | |
| Anikoku, that is AWSOME!!!
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I'm getting a cloak! Yayz! X3
“…a fountain full of blood from heathens…and severed heads to put candlesticks in…for me a blood-bought reward, a silken noose and gold-wrought sword…an eternity to punish in, I have an eternity to punish sin…for destruction, sweet destruction, oh holy destruction, divine destruction!”- hidan |
| | | | Fai_re
Akatsuki Overlord - Deidara
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Location : If I told you, I'd have to bite you to death.
| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Fri May 23, 2008 10:44 pm | |
| I AGREE WITH YOU WHOLE-HEARTEDLY, MY FISHY INU FAN FRIEND.
Write more HidanTema, anikoku. I demand it. 
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| | | | Kisame-san
Kisame
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| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Wed Jun 04, 2008 12:50 am | |
| fishy inu fan freind? *shrug*
Yes! Definetly! You are such an amazing writer anikoku!  
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“…a fountain full of blood from heathens…and severed heads to put candlesticks in…for me a blood-bought reward, a silken noose and gold-wrought sword…an eternity to punish in, I have an eternity to punish sin…for destruction, sweet destruction, oh holy destruction, divine destruction!”- hidan |
| | | | Fai_re
Akatsuki Overlord - Deidara
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| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Thu Jun 19, 2008 4:45 pm | |
| Yes. Quite. You may never understand...
ANIKOKU, YOU FOOL! POST/WRITE MORE FANFICTION! IF YOU DO, IT MIGHT MOTIVATE ME TO WRITE THAT HIDANTEMA ONE YOU'RE FROTHING AT THE MOUTH FOR.
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| | | | anikoku
Tobi
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| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Fri Jun 20, 2008 6:36 am | |
| Wha-whaa- ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
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| | | | Fai_re
Akatsuki Overlord - Deidara
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| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Fri Jun 27, 2008 8:59 pm | |
| DON'T GIVE ME THAT POO! *tonfas ur face* C'MON, GIRL! I NEED MOAR MOTIVATION! AND I KNOW YOU GOT IT IN YA.
OH, and does anyone have any requests for me? Akatsuki fanfics, pairing fanfics, or fanfics from another manga... whatever it is, I'll write it for ya!  anikoku, you aren't allowed to request. Hohoho.
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| | | | anikoku
Tobi
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| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:06 pm | |
| Yeah, yeah.
I have another fic. <3
| Spoiler: | | | He is a genuine psychopath, a sadomasochistic serial killer. He devotes his life to a religion focused solely on homicide. Nothing distinguishes his carnage; often he will return bathed with the blood of another senseless slaughter. This time it is a girl no more than five. Arrogant, foul-mouthed— most likely plagued with several mental diseases. He is a danger, and the world should rid its face of him as soon as possible.
He’s a romantist at heart. He has a soft spot for penguins; he’s never seen one in his life. He laughs like nobody else. He likes cookie dough ice cream, but honestly, he prefers vanilla. He’s an obnoxious teenager. He’s full to the brim with solitude. His eyes pierce violet when no one’s watching. He sings in the shower, and no angel could top a voice that beautiful.
His partner is equally bloodthirsty. Forces combined, they have taken down many a country. He has no conscience. He has no morals. He brushes the borderline of human, touches upon devil.
They bicker all the time. They’ll never admit that they’re the best of friends.
He is part of an S-Rank criminal organization.
He feels he belongs there. They are his family, they are the reason he isn’t broken at heart. They live in their own world. He lives in theirs and his own.
He could never care about a life.
He carries out his duty for God. He wasn’t supposed to love. He’s in love. His crumpled photograph of her was with him till the very end. He’s not a virgin, no where near, but the way he treats her, he could have been, in the furthest respect. He radiates heat, his caress is the sand he bathes with in the oasis. His hands are cut and ragged; they smell like ashes. He uses too much hair gel, the empty bottles line the window ledge. His silver hair, nearly skimming his shoulders, is striking without it.
Chiriku, head of Temple of Fire; former member of 12 Guard Ninjas of Fire.
Sarutobi Asuma, age 30, former member of 12 Guard Ninjas of Fire.
Attempted murder of Fourth Kazekage’s daughter.
Nobody knows that he carried her all sixty miles back to her village. His stomach was hanging open, and he lacked half his face and a windpipe.
She is his salvation.
He kills as he pleases. He is a crow; he carries death on his shoulder. It is a three-bladed scythe.
He kills for his lord. He obsesses over his religion, his religion that is fake and meaningless. He is scum, scum, scum. He must be exterminated. He is not one of us.
He would walk into a store and head straight for the pornography. He saves people in need. She’s seen it happen more than once. He believes. He is all action. He wants to fly. His wall is covered with graffiti; he’s not a skilled artist. The paint is red. He is one of the deepest thinkers. He can sit still for hours, but he’d rather have her by his side. Never refuses a dare. Too arrogant for his own good, but she wouldn’t want it any other way. His smile melts the ladies. His real smile is brighter than the sun. He is a rainbow, and if she could, she would show everyone that.
He has all he would ever need, he wishes time would freeze and leave it that way. But happiness never lasts.
Months later, he was blown apart limb to limb and buried forty feet under ground in the Nara forest. Though his body is immortal, he will never be uncovered in enemy turf. He deserves his fate, he is permanently sealed away. He will harm no one.
Or smile with anyone. Or eat ice cream together with anyone. Or sleep in another’s embrace. Or live. Or laugh. Or love.
He is evil.
He is the only man she’d ever wanted to make happy.
He is wicked. He is a sin.
He deserved to live. He’s more than you think he is. He’s better than you.
We carry out justice. He is part of an organization trying to take over the world. Nothing is unfair. Everyone is satisfied.
No, they aren’t.
He died laughing. So I heard. |
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| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:15 pm | |
| *CRIES TEARS OF BLOOD*
SO.. BEAUTIFUL!  
I LOVE EVERY LITTLE BIT OF IT. I'm SO TOTALLY stealing your format for a GokuTsuna fic. Haha!
Write more, you fool. I feel slightly inspired.
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| | | | Kisame-san
Kisame
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| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Fri Aug 15, 2008 6:53 pm | |
| That is abslutely AMAZING anikoku!!!!
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“…a fountain full of blood from heathens…and severed heads to put candlesticks in…for me a blood-bought reward, a silken noose and gold-wrought sword…an eternity to punish in, I have an eternity to punish sin…for destruction, sweet destruction, oh holy destruction, divine destruction!”- hidan |
| | | | anikoku
Tobi
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| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Fri Aug 15, 2008 6:54 pm | |
| *embarrassment*
Thank you..
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Kisame
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| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Fri Aug 15, 2008 9:16 pm | |
| Seriously though! This is unbelievable!
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I'm getting a cloak! Yayz! X3
“…a fountain full of blood from heathens…and severed heads to put candlesticks in…for me a blood-bought reward, a silken noose and gold-wrought sword…an eternity to punish in, I have an eternity to punish sin…for destruction, sweet destruction, oh holy destruction, divine destruction!”- hidan |
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Akatsuki Overlord - Deidara
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| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Thu Aug 28, 2008 7:57 pm | |
| Isn't it?! Shouldn't she write more?! XD
Oh, and if you guys wanna see some of my fanfics that I MIGHT'VE forgotten to send to you, here's my piczo with my favorites.
...If you want to be able to read them, PM me and ask for the password. !! Remember, don't tell anyone once you know it!!
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| | | | anikoku
Tobi
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| | Subject: Re: I share my own drabbles. Fri Aug 29, 2008 9:37 pm | |
| *bangs head on wall*
Embarrassment!! Oh, and I wrote another:
This is if Temari and some Suna folk were there as reenforcement during the fight with Shikamaru and Hidan.
| Spoiler: | | | I’m rooted to the ground as the scene goes by. Because it’s this man, and I knew what he was for so long but why? And it’s running through my blood; the renewed realization that he was enemy. The adrenaline is pumping up, my heart is beating fast, and I’m seeing in my mind:
the suffocating heat of the desert, the shadows bouncing off the sand, his searching eyes and his words so sweet and painful
I can’t move and my mind’s a wreck NO don’t remember. Don’t look over here.
monster inhuman freak ruthless heatless killer psycho
I’m watching him and boy genius Nara Shikamaru is explaining the ploy behind all of this (the blood capsule and the faked death is annoyingly smart).
Somewhere in my mind I think: he’s going to lose. It’s funny that I didn’t see that before. But he’s hanging over a pit and covered with explosive notes and I can tell there’s no escape because we’re also here.
We? We’re here to help. And I’m oddly calm as I’m assessing the situation because nothing is entering my brain that’s frozen over. I think to myself that he could call over right now and turn me against my village. It’s so selfish but here I am thinking of my reputation and while he’s dying-
But what do I care? That’s right. I don’t care he’s the enemy we must destroy him. Him.
homicidal sadomasochistic unfeeling uncaring insane manipulative bastard
“...it’s your partner’s blood.” That’s right; my subconscious is thinking, remembering.
His partner. His best friend. It had startled her how much he cared about his organization. That’s not how criminals are supposed to be?
And his expression hits me like a brick wall; all his arrogance and murderous intent and jackass personality gone for a second. It was shock like that of a child and the pain was so evident on his face (nobody else looks the least surprised). Nobody sees the human emotion and I suppose they’re past the point where they can view the foe as such.
But I see it and it’s heartbreaking and my barrier is weakening. It was a dirty tactic; now that I think about it it’s damn cruel. I can see the words written all over his face.
In this moment I am thinking of how we justify ourselves. Because I’ve watched him fight and all he’s doing is fighting (since he was here at this place and time), and he hasn’t turned us against our friends and it’s him who is outnumbered and ridiculed and yet he hasn’t said a word because why? The enemy. They call him.
Suddenly I want to cry out to him. I don’t know how much longer I can watch this it’s unfair it’s torture and what are we all doing standing around my village it’s MY VILLAGE. Do I really have to choose now? I’m not ready for something that will change my life; I think behind the weird mist clouding my mind.
And Nara is lighting his cigarette-
-then he looks at me.
I can’t even look away from his stinging violet eyes, and I can tell that he’s taking it in; yes I’ve been here all this time watching you go down. Still it’s not quite hitting him, I see the disbelief and I want to die.
“You’ve screwed me up so bad; I can’t stop thinking about you, seriously.”
Oh, god.
“It’s only a fuckin’ border! Is that how much I mean to you!?”
Please don’t do this no no no-
“Blon- Temari.”
The next thing I do I regret for the rest of my life. I hear the explosion and there’s screaming, I’m screaming and someone is throwing me out of the way.
I didn’t try to save him. I’m about to lose my mind, and distantly Nara is talking.
I’m standing here and it hits me that it’s him who can’t die.
The last thing I hear is his voice, no doubt on the verge of insanity like I am, and I’m running forward so fast my mind is clear and sharp I am ready.
Because I know who my hero is. |
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